Can a native speaker of English check structure and grammar of the sentences, thanks?

Six years ago I had love a girl who looks like boy, she wearing dark hair in a bob, eyes are very attractive. I fall in love at first sight with her the first time I clapped eyes on her. But I was very shy; there was a flush in my cheeks when she gave me a look. But I still muster the courage to beg she gave me her phone number. She open my hollow of the palm, wrote lightly in my hand. In a few years I returned to her city yet again, met her in the corner of the street, She looked back and smile to me, But it is a pity that we were no more not having no spoken dialogue.